Wednesday 28 May 2014

Writing Wednesday

Good afternoon,

This morning Room 2 started a wee writing assessment based on "I heard a whisper..."




They are producing some pretty cool stuff.

Before they knew it the goblins let out the angry terrifying big scary bears.

...they packed their bags and set off for an adventure.

A long time ago in a land far away lived a good girl and a good boy.

...the girls weren't aloud in the forest because a goblin might snatch them up for dinner.

But just then she heard a whisper. The whisper was big. The whisper was clear so Emma could hear...

The wolf was frightening. "ROAR!" yelled the wolf.

...the green grass like a big fat tree started to shake.

...they heard a whisper. They turned around...

...were on a search for the blue crystal...some goblins whispered "come with me"...

They said to Alice their pet wolf "can you hear something whispering?"...

...the boy heard a whisper. It led him to a deep dark forest...

They came to a cliff. Aaron heard someone whisper "Come down here."

(Punctuation not withstanding!)

Mr Grant

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